Have you seen this woman today?
She makes me smile, cry a little,
She blows me away.
She takes my words
And weaves them into silken strands,
Fine and eloquent and full of poetry.
Lyrical treacle running down my spine,
Coating my every sensation with pleasured pain.
This woman I love,
She makes me smile,
A childlike smile that
Makes my cheeks ache with innocent
But profound and intense joy.
She blows me away,
This woman.
This woman I’ve seen today.
(For my Porgy)
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Damn I love your poetry, and you.
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Thank you sweet man.
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I think the second line is missing a “me”
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Corrected. Thanks John 🙂
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Now its perfect 🙂
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You are very kind, thank you… 🙂
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Reblogged this on IshaiyaFreshlySqueezed.
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You do know how to make love with words Maria. Absolutely beautiful my friend. 😀 ♥ Hugs ♥
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What a lovely compliment Sonel, thank you so much 🙂
Hugs back
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You’re very welcome sweetness. 😀 ♥ Hugs ♥
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Lyrical treacle? Love it~!
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Thank you Argie! That was my favourite line too…
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